I’ve uploaded a new Chapter 1 and a revised Chapter 2 for your review, so if you’ve already read the first version, please have a glance at the new versions. As usual, your honest response to the story and writing is appreciated. I understand this is not everyone’s cup of tea as the characters will be quite unconventional for a romantic suspense, but this story has been in me for a long time and draws on some very personal material. I want to write it regardless. It may not find much of a home, and I may decide not to write it, but please let me know what you think.